Writing
unit 7: Write an opinion essay
The
government plans to introduce a new law which will introduce school
on Saturday mornings in order to improve the level of education. In
my point of view, this would have some negative consequences.
In
the first place, I believe that the weekends are for a reson: to relax.
If the children and the teenagers have to go to school on Saturdays morning it’s possible that some of them don’t have time to do
other things like, sports, or do our homeworks. So if this law is
introduced, i’ve no doubt that a lot of them will have more
difficulty to pass the exams and practise sports or haveing a relax
moment ot the weekends. I also think that this would discriminate
agianst the students that they’re getting good marks.
If
the aim of the government is to lower the number of the students that
don’t pass the exams, it seems to me that there is a better
alternative: if they spend more money on more schools and teachers in
the country would get better results.
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